Post by Drax on Jan 13, 2006 23:53:30 GMT 8
ok so i started this about a week ago. I have profiles and some history to go with this, But i need some feed back first. Do you want to see more? Or do I need to stop here?
Chapter 1. The Attack.
Space station Boston in orbit over Earth. 01:00 hrs March,27 2079
" Just look at all that trash, it makes me sick." Cpt.James Anderson commander of the space station Boston. The space station is overlooking Earth and its forming trash rings. T.V and radio station's have filled the outer atmosphere with crap.A metal wast land.
"Well sir its time we started picking it up. You know space trash men, will do pick ups on leap year." Lt. Andy Timesly second in command space station Boston.What are you talking about Andy?" Never mind that Sir!" "What is it LT?"
"Capt.Anderson we just picked up a UFO on long range scanners." Whats its heading?" Its current course is set to Earth. It's closing fast.My I suggest we go to full alert?" " OK LT send out a welcome message as well as a warning to slow and stop at Boston." " Yes sir. Huston this is space station Boston over" This is Huston go ahead Boston. " This is Lt. Andy Timesly were going to red alert. There is a UFO inbound to Earth. We don't know if there hostel or not. Requesting fighter support at this time. over" Boston this is Huston were sending your request to the white house now.You will be receiving the two Falcons we have in the air now Stand by for info. Huston OUT.
The two lone Falcon fighters set out for Boston. The rest of there squad sound asleep in there bunks on Earth. Soon a call will be made for the rest to join them. But that can take forever, maybe never. The two men know if anything happens there all they got.Rounding the horizon sits Boston. The two fighters make there way into a defensive flight pattern."Boston this is Falcon six Raven and this is Falcon seven Red eye.Were in defensive flight pattern and holding. Any request over?"Boston here this is Lt Timesly Raven,Red eye thanks for getting here so fast. As for a request just keep the Jerry's off us OK." This is Raven roger that OUT.
Washington D.C. The white house. 0110 Hrs 3/27/2079. Mr.president please wake up there is some thing you need to look at. "Just a min harry."Please sir its urgent. " OK OK I'm coming just a min." Mr.president Earth might not have that long. Reports from Space station Boston say that there is a UFO on track for Earth. "My god harry are you joking?" Sir I'm not joking! please OK the dispatch of Falcon fighters to Boston." Of course and send them a message to hold fire till fired on. Got it?" Yes sir.
01:21 Flight control Eagle's nest 3.
This is flight control Lt Wilson speaking. How can I help you? Yes this is General Stewart.Please get your commanding officer on the line now Lt. sir yes sir.
02:24 Hay Capitan. Its within viewing range. "Put it on screen LT." Yes sir. The rooms LCD lights up. On the display there sits not one ship but many ships. The pact are flying so close together that the scanner is picking it up as one. Sir?.. " LT call N.A.S.A have them send up more fighters. Tell them that we have a big f**king problem here. The two they sent arnt enough. Activate Bostons self defense weapons. Have they sent any word to us?" Well sir they might have and we might have missed it. as well as they might have missed ours. Bip bip bip bip Oh my god...Looking down at the scanner in front of him The young Lt's fears approach. Sir theres an incoming round.
" Well target it and shoot it down. all crew, all crew, move to battle stations. We have in coming,we have incoming this is not a drill. This is Commander Anderson. We are to defend this station with Ill help. Get to your guns and knock out anything incoming. Thats all for now good luck."
02:27 The two station Falcon fighters set out to intercept the first round. Falcon six took the hit. The fire ball lasted only a splat second but the aftermath was death. Falcon seven turned and headed back for the station.The loss of Falcon six gave Boston's defenders time to load there guns and brace for a fight."Boston this is Falcon seven Red eye." This is Boston go ahead Red eye. "Yeah there here and closing fast are you getting my drift?" The response was not important. The fact was Commander Ken Larson AKA Red eye
was quickly tangled in a dog fight. "Three no seven fighters are on me this is Red eye requesting close fire support."
This is Boston were on it Falcon seven. The lone fighter came speeding past the station. The alien fighters broke in to two groups.
One headed to Boston and the other fallowing the long fighter around the space stations defenders. With blaster canons blazing and the auto canons firing the seven ships were cut to peaces. "This is Red eye thanks a million Boston." Good flying, but there will be more. You are to land refuel, rearm and bring back all fighter groups."This is Falcon seven will do.OUT."
02:46 Boston this is Houston.The additional fighters are on the way.Send a casualty report.OVER.
"This is Boston there is one K.I.A Falcon six was shot and destroyed. That is all over." This is Huston sorry Boston good luck.
.Houston out.
As the fleet of Falcon fighters approach from Earth there is a flash on the surface and than another. Small patches of red start to form.
"The planet is being hit with something.LT report!" Sir its Washington there gone... The flashes continued for the next two and a half minuets. Than the alien mass was there and the Falcon fighters engaged them."Lt fire at will. Attn crew Fire at will. Were defending Earth now as well. Thats all out." The ensuing battle lasted only few moments. But they were hell. The three fighter groups broke and started to pick apart the alien flyer's. The battle raged as the main ship came within Bostons range. The first to strike was the alien ship. It had twin canons in front that opened up with a hell storm of fire. Boston fired its main canon once be-for being knocked of line. The one shot hit the alien ship in the forward right wing tarring it from the craft. At that time the alien ships missile system was running at full throttle. Our own fighters flu into some to keep them from hitting Boston. The stations defenses were working hard but coming up short thats when the main cab was hit. The alien ship started to turn away from there wound as the last of the fighters were being shoot down. The last call over the radio was that the U.N HQ had been knocked out. Thats when we got a break.
03:00
The alien force seemed to be doing something. The last squad of star fighters were all smoking and headed to Earth.
"Six ships out of seventy. Thats all thats left... Lt get a damage report now!" Sir we have lost main guns and are haul is cracked in three places. Were coming apart."OK can we abandon ship?" No sir. Were here for the long hall." How long is this station going to hold?" Sir id say two hours maybe. Sir.there is more incoming and there fast.
On Earth the night started out soft and slumber. The sun set was one to remember. Little did anyone know it was the last peacefull one for years to come. As the late night crowed was going home from the bars. Officer Ryan Hall was picking up the drunks when
There was a call over the radio that all cars are to head to town. That there is a riot in sewing. Then over head The sound of space ships going up was like hammering pistons in your ears. There must have been a hundred or so.Officer hall was at the city limits when the sky turned into day. There was something going on in the sky. Fire balls came and went in flashes. All to soon the young office new each ball of flames was a pilots death. Then the horizon Lit up like in a gaze of fire.It looked as if it were the end of time it self. The great Apocalypse was here. In all directions there were mushroom clouds.Officer Hall stopped his patrol car and got out to look over the city and the horizon. The pitcher was a sad one. Fire in all places, people crying out, no power to life giving machines. Every home a small grave. With the city in rewen officer Hall heeds to his grand Fathers home in Texas.
The power was the first thing to go on Earth. The Alien Race Hit every Major power plant in the world. Than they started blowing up capitals around the globe.With no power and for the most part no government the Earth was glowing a dreadful deep red.
The world in chaos. The aliens started sending ground troops.Suicide bombers were the first to come. They Had wings and
swooped down from the sky's grabbing onto anything where people were. Than they would just blow up Killing all around. That lasted for some time. Than came what look like over sized people. They were ground troops. Carrying weapons and killing anything that moved.The aliens were meet soon with small arms fire from the people of the towns. The small resistance was enuff for the army and nathanal Gard to get moving. As the day began to break the aliens started to be seen in the sky's. The air force started sending up F-25s and F-22s They kicked some alien ass. The sky's were once agen ablaze with battle.The Earth fighters around the world Ignored each other to attack the aliens. This was the start of the alliance Across the globe. With the sky's in our hands the aliens were at a loss on the ground. After taking Africa there other ground forces were killed off,or with drew. The aliens have a strong hold there. Thats when they stopped attacking. They pooled all forces to Africa and are starting a slow stretching campaign.
Chapter 1. The Attack.
Space station Boston in orbit over Earth. 01:00 hrs March,27 2079
" Just look at all that trash, it makes me sick." Cpt.James Anderson commander of the space station Boston. The space station is overlooking Earth and its forming trash rings. T.V and radio station's have filled the outer atmosphere with crap.A metal wast land.
"Well sir its time we started picking it up. You know space trash men, will do pick ups on leap year." Lt. Andy Timesly second in command space station Boston.What are you talking about Andy?" Never mind that Sir!" "What is it LT?"
"Capt.Anderson we just picked up a UFO on long range scanners." Whats its heading?" Its current course is set to Earth. It's closing fast.My I suggest we go to full alert?" " OK LT send out a welcome message as well as a warning to slow and stop at Boston." " Yes sir. Huston this is space station Boston over" This is Huston go ahead Boston. " This is Lt. Andy Timesly were going to red alert. There is a UFO inbound to Earth. We don't know if there hostel or not. Requesting fighter support at this time. over" Boston this is Huston were sending your request to the white house now.You will be receiving the two Falcons we have in the air now Stand by for info. Huston OUT.
The two lone Falcon fighters set out for Boston. The rest of there squad sound asleep in there bunks on Earth. Soon a call will be made for the rest to join them. But that can take forever, maybe never. The two men know if anything happens there all they got.Rounding the horizon sits Boston. The two fighters make there way into a defensive flight pattern."Boston this is Falcon six Raven and this is Falcon seven Red eye.Were in defensive flight pattern and holding. Any request over?"Boston here this is Lt Timesly Raven,Red eye thanks for getting here so fast. As for a request just keep the Jerry's off us OK." This is Raven roger that OUT.
Washington D.C. The white house. 0110 Hrs 3/27/2079. Mr.president please wake up there is some thing you need to look at. "Just a min harry."Please sir its urgent. " OK OK I'm coming just a min." Mr.president Earth might not have that long. Reports from Space station Boston say that there is a UFO on track for Earth. "My god harry are you joking?" Sir I'm not joking! please OK the dispatch of Falcon fighters to Boston." Of course and send them a message to hold fire till fired on. Got it?" Yes sir.
01:21 Flight control Eagle's nest 3.
This is flight control Lt Wilson speaking. How can I help you? Yes this is General Stewart.Please get your commanding officer on the line now Lt. sir yes sir.
02:24 Hay Capitan. Its within viewing range. "Put it on screen LT." Yes sir. The rooms LCD lights up. On the display there sits not one ship but many ships. The pact are flying so close together that the scanner is picking it up as one. Sir?.. " LT call N.A.S.A have them send up more fighters. Tell them that we have a big f**king problem here. The two they sent arnt enough. Activate Bostons self defense weapons. Have they sent any word to us?" Well sir they might have and we might have missed it. as well as they might have missed ours. Bip bip bip bip Oh my god...Looking down at the scanner in front of him The young Lt's fears approach. Sir theres an incoming round.
" Well target it and shoot it down. all crew, all crew, move to battle stations. We have in coming,we have incoming this is not a drill. This is Commander Anderson. We are to defend this station with Ill help. Get to your guns and knock out anything incoming. Thats all for now good luck."
02:27 The two station Falcon fighters set out to intercept the first round. Falcon six took the hit. The fire ball lasted only a splat second but the aftermath was death. Falcon seven turned and headed back for the station.The loss of Falcon six gave Boston's defenders time to load there guns and brace for a fight."Boston this is Falcon seven Red eye." This is Boston go ahead Red eye. "Yeah there here and closing fast are you getting my drift?" The response was not important. The fact was Commander Ken Larson AKA Red eye
was quickly tangled in a dog fight. "Three no seven fighters are on me this is Red eye requesting close fire support."
This is Boston were on it Falcon seven. The lone fighter came speeding past the station. The alien fighters broke in to two groups.
One headed to Boston and the other fallowing the long fighter around the space stations defenders. With blaster canons blazing and the auto canons firing the seven ships were cut to peaces. "This is Red eye thanks a million Boston." Good flying, but there will be more. You are to land refuel, rearm and bring back all fighter groups."This is Falcon seven will do.OUT."
02:46 Boston this is Houston.The additional fighters are on the way.Send a casualty report.OVER.
"This is Boston there is one K.I.A Falcon six was shot and destroyed. That is all over." This is Huston sorry Boston good luck.
.Houston out.
As the fleet of Falcon fighters approach from Earth there is a flash on the surface and than another. Small patches of red start to form.
"The planet is being hit with something.LT report!" Sir its Washington there gone... The flashes continued for the next two and a half minuets. Than the alien mass was there and the Falcon fighters engaged them."Lt fire at will. Attn crew Fire at will. Were defending Earth now as well. Thats all out." The ensuing battle lasted only few moments. But they were hell. The three fighter groups broke and started to pick apart the alien flyer's. The battle raged as the main ship came within Bostons range. The first to strike was the alien ship. It had twin canons in front that opened up with a hell storm of fire. Boston fired its main canon once be-for being knocked of line. The one shot hit the alien ship in the forward right wing tarring it from the craft. At that time the alien ships missile system was running at full throttle. Our own fighters flu into some to keep them from hitting Boston. The stations defenses were working hard but coming up short thats when the main cab was hit. The alien ship started to turn away from there wound as the last of the fighters were being shoot down. The last call over the radio was that the U.N HQ had been knocked out. Thats when we got a break.
03:00
The alien force seemed to be doing something. The last squad of star fighters were all smoking and headed to Earth.
"Six ships out of seventy. Thats all thats left... Lt get a damage report now!" Sir we have lost main guns and are haul is cracked in three places. Were coming apart."OK can we abandon ship?" No sir. Were here for the long hall." How long is this station going to hold?" Sir id say two hours maybe. Sir.there is more incoming and there fast.
On Earth the night started out soft and slumber. The sun set was one to remember. Little did anyone know it was the last peacefull one for years to come. As the late night crowed was going home from the bars. Officer Ryan Hall was picking up the drunks when
There was a call over the radio that all cars are to head to town. That there is a riot in sewing. Then over head The sound of space ships going up was like hammering pistons in your ears. There must have been a hundred or so.Officer hall was at the city limits when the sky turned into day. There was something going on in the sky. Fire balls came and went in flashes. All to soon the young office new each ball of flames was a pilots death. Then the horizon Lit up like in a gaze of fire.It looked as if it were the end of time it self. The great Apocalypse was here. In all directions there were mushroom clouds.Officer Hall stopped his patrol car and got out to look over the city and the horizon. The pitcher was a sad one. Fire in all places, people crying out, no power to life giving machines. Every home a small grave. With the city in rewen officer Hall heeds to his grand Fathers home in Texas.
The power was the first thing to go on Earth. The Alien Race Hit every Major power plant in the world. Than they started blowing up capitals around the globe.With no power and for the most part no government the Earth was glowing a dreadful deep red.
The world in chaos. The aliens started sending ground troops.Suicide bombers were the first to come. They Had wings and
swooped down from the sky's grabbing onto anything where people were. Than they would just blow up Killing all around. That lasted for some time. Than came what look like over sized people. They were ground troops. Carrying weapons and killing anything that moved.The aliens were meet soon with small arms fire from the people of the towns. The small resistance was enuff for the army and nathanal Gard to get moving. As the day began to break the aliens started to be seen in the sky's. The air force started sending up F-25s and F-22s They kicked some alien ass. The sky's were once agen ablaze with battle.The Earth fighters around the world Ignored each other to attack the aliens. This was the start of the alliance Across the globe. With the sky's in our hands the aliens were at a loss on the ground. After taking Africa there other ground forces were killed off,or with drew. The aliens have a strong hold there. Thats when they stopped attacking. They pooled all forces to Africa and are starting a slow stretching campaign.
